On Your Toes

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Solem Saje
5th Jan 2011, 4:08 PM

The revised first chapter is half done, kiddies! Rejoice at any moment!

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Any time now.

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I'll assume you've rejoiced as hard as you possibly can.

I hope you've all been having a good new year, and haven't broken too many of your new resolutions. (You should have managed for at least a month. Minimum.)

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Solem Saje
5th Jan 2011, 4:30 PM

Also, to my reader Leslie, who so graciously commented (and you have no idea how nice it is to have a fan that sends feedback!):

The three main characters are actually based on real people. I'm the dazzling, handsome redhead.

I've managed to draw us all fairly accurately, and you might be amused to know that Ben is actually the youngest in our group of early 20-somethings by a year. The poor guy has been balding since the age of fourteen. To give you an idea, he dyed his hair gray during senior week at our old high school, and was asked to leave the grounds a few times, before he was able to show that he was legally seventeen.

The guy is... a bit of a nihilist, but he's actually been the one in our group to see to it that I update on time. I'd still be dithering around on page thirty if it weren't for him. This does not me, or anyone around us from making bald jokes though.

I'd find him a girlfriend, but I don't think his wife would like that! (Or maybe she would. I have no desire to find what she does behind closed doors.)

In closing, I hope you keep reading, and be sure to check the end of this month when I have the new first chapter up! I'm afraid the poor quality (I had NO idea what I was doing back then) has done a lot to dissuade readers such as yourself from getting this far.

Keep reading, and I'll keep writing!

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